Dragonflys~~Haiku

August 14, 2013, 6:35 am

DragonflysColors of Opalstransparent wings ride the windas dragons fly by...

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August 14, 2013, 12:49 pm

I can see this my friend! Quite a beauty you've penned. ;-) Hugs, John

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August 14, 2013, 1:38 pm

This is lovely, Avery. Keep the haikus coming. This one warmed my heart.

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August 15, 2013, 3:31 pm

Hi Rb... such a lovely creation, think the title makes it a four liner... not needed as a guide either as your three liner says it all to some degree..... liked this BG

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August 18, 2013, 4:35 pm

Love this Avery as this part of Texas is rich with Dragonflys this time of year... Bri~

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thank you all....and I didnt think that the title would seem like a 4th line..i will watch that in the future...i love dragonflies and got a close up pic of a red one ..so beautiful.. but my last line...

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August 20, 2013, 4:13 pm

as soon as I saw dragons and flying I knew what this little lovely was about... no need to make these things too easy for the reader... someone once said to me, 'show but do not tell' and what perfect...

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August 21, 2013, 6:44 am

Thanks Brendan.. when I see a beautiful peacock flying.. they remind me of dragons of olde...and their feathers are as beautiful as the wings of a dragonfly... peace

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August 21, 2013, 6:33 pm

Could be most wrong dear you but, I don't think peacocks can fly... we buy them in for country estates and the likes and they never go away...... will have to google this... Brendan ps. unless a male...

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September 3, 2013, 3:31 pm

Very sweet write RB :)

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September 8, 2013, 7:19 am

Peacocks still fly, it is not just a vestigile part of the whole, still functions in this day and age!!!! and when they d o fly they look like Dragons..i can many people in the olden days thought so...

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September 8, 2013, 4:59 pm

I don't think they do at all unless with emus..... must be more accurate dear lady, a notion is not enough for you to say I am wrong, no crit intended just noting a factuality.... BGStill like this...

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